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Post by Duskstar on Jul 15, 2008 10:44:47 GMT -5
Hey, as you know, I am Duskstar, leader and head admin of the site. Welcome! If your reading this you have joined. Either that or your just a guest that is snooping XD. Well, one way or another, your here, and that's what counts, right?
Ok, now on to bigger and better things. Obviously, we are going to need active and decent rping high positions here at Warriors: In the Night. So...
ONLY TRY OUT IF YOUR POSITIVE YOU ARE GOING TO BE ACTIVE, AND NOT JUST MAKE YOUR BIO AND LEAVE.
Ok, if you would like to try out for a high position, post your bio here, using the bio form. If I think its good enough, then you'll get the spot! If not, then... sorry, but I don't think your quite right for the job. Remember, no whining if you don't get it. Whoopdee do, I mean come on, move on! This site can still be fun even if you don't get a high position ^^.
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Leader --- Duskstar Deputy Medicine Cat
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Post by bramble on Aug 7, 2008 16:44:17 GMT -5
Name: Silverheart Age: 15 moons Gender: Tom Clan: StoneClan Rank: Deputy
Appearance: Silverheart is slightly larger than an ordinary 12-moon cat. He has a solid silver pelt that sticks out in the night, which is why he was names, Silverheart. His silver pelt is flawless with no scars or dots of other colors except for his stomach which has many scars from previous battles. His legs are very muscular because he is a strong runner than can outrun rabbits and birds. Silverheart is skinnier than most because he doesn't eat as much as other cats. Silverheart's claws are smaller than normal but sharp enough to do their job. Silverheart also has dark blue eyes that can see great distances.
Personality: When Silverheart was young, he was jitty and excited all the time. Now he has learned to have self control over himself but still 'laughs' (or purrs) and has a good time during a celebration and such. Silverheart is very loyal to StoneClan and is a fierce fighter. Occasionally he gets too into the battle and fights until his opponent squeels. Yet he calms down afterwards. Silverheart is very patient and has a great understanding of young apprentices because he knows that he used to be like them when he was young. But Silverheart's problem is he feels like he still owes the dead cats that he failed to defend. So sometimes he feels that he doesn't deserve to be deputy. But he knows that those cats would still be proud of him for all he's done.
History: Kit: As a kit, Silverheart was jumpy and excited to be an apprentice since he was 2 moons old. He would always play fight the other three kits that grew up with him. Once, Silverkit went out to hunt when he was 4 1/2 moons old and brought back a mouse. The cats of the Clan were impressed, but he still got a good thump on the head.
Apprentice: Like he was when he was a kit, Silverpaw was very jumpy. Over a short amount of time Silverpaw learned to be calmer and not just rush right into battle. Silverpaw got involved with a fox attack on the camp when he and another apprentice had to drive off a fox that was attacking his mother and an elder. At an age of about 10 moons Silverpaw and another apprentice fought of a rouge that was attacking the camp, that was earned him his warrior name, Silverheart.
Warrior: Silverheart got into a lot of trouble as a warrior. During one leafbare, Silverheart stole herbs from the medicine cat den and gave them to another Clan because they were having a lot of trouble with greencough. The medicine cat didn't like that, and he was forbidden to leave the camp for 1/4 of a moon. That wasn't much compared to some other things. A Raccon family once attacked StoneClan and killed one of his friends, she was one of the many cats that he felt he had failed. He battled and lost against the father raccoon and was asleep for three days before waking up, the scar is still on his today. Silverheart also got involved with a plan to kill the deputy and leader by a Clan cat and a few rouges. Silverheart tried to defend the deputy but failed, yet he took the leader down with him. The deputy was killed but fellow warriors fought of the rouges and the leader, Duskstar, was never even hit once. After that, Duskstar decided to make Silverheart deputy for his courage, and killing the traitor cat.
Deputy: Silverheart has only been deputy for about a moon now, so there isn't much to tell. The only semi-sifnificant thing about his deputyship is that he was part of the patrol that found a poisonous berry growing in StoneClan territory, and a dead bird next to the bush. But that isn't very significant, considering no one had eaten it accept for that poor bird.
RP Example: Silverheart crouched down and moved forward slowly. A rabbit was about a tail length in front of him. Silverheart prepared to pounce but right before he did a bird flew overhead and startled the rabbit. The rabbit took off, and Silverheart took off after it. He waited until he and the rabbit were just a mouse length apart before pouncing. Silverheart leaped into the air, gripped the rabbit between his paws and killed it with one swift bite. Silverheart panted and took a few deep breathes. Chasing rabbits wasn't easy, but it fed the Clan, so it was worth it. Silverheart picked up his catch with his mouth and padded in the direction of the camp.
Family: Father: Moonheart (deceased) Mother: Goldtail (deceased) Brothers/Sisters: None
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Post by Duskstar on Aug 7, 2008 17:20:22 GMT -5
Welcome There are a few things about this bio I would like to mention. 1. Deputies must be over 25 moons 2. In the second sentence of appearance you said, "His silver pelt is flawless with no scars or dots of other colors" And in another, you said, "Silverheart's stomach is covered with scars from many previous battles with other Clan cats, rouges, loners, and kittypets that are foolish enough to enter the forest." 3. Some rabbits are bigger than 5 moon old kits, and I highly doubt young Silverkit would be able to catch one at that young of age, without even learning a crouch. I suppose he might have been able to catch a mouse or something. 4. He only had three moons of apprentice training. Usually apprentices are made warriors at 12 moons, and the EARLIEST I've heard of was 10 moons. Other than that looks good. *waits for another audition to decide who gets it*
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Post by bramble on Aug 9, 2008 11:47:05 GMT -5
Sorry =( I fixed most of it, though.
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Post by >>is_WHITE_cat<< on Aug 10, 2008 14:49:46 GMT -5
Who am I? The moon, the wind... Name: Eclipsestorm
How long have I been here. Just me, alone. Age: 28 Moons
A cat you cannot see... who is she? Gender: She-Cat
My home. I live, where the storms keep blowing in my ears... Clan: SwiftClan
What do I do? What is my purpose? To serve, to tell... Rank: Medicine Cat
What do I look like? You will not see me anyway--I am invisable into the Snow. Appearance: Eclipsestorm got her name for the white pelt she has. One black paw - on her back leg - is the only thing that makes her stand out. Her fur, long thick and protective keeps her warm and sometimes too hot! Her pelt tends to be neatly groomed, as a result of her self-conciousness. It's rare for any cat to find a hair out of place unless she just woke up or is grooming herself. Her fur lengthens as it travels from her face to her tail, giving the tail she has a squirrel-like appearence.
Her shining orange eyes are like sunlight among the dark winter. They usually reflect burning, sharp and intense enough to discourage any cat from challenging her. She has a tint of yellow in her iris.
Her whiskers are all white-cut perfectly short and neat trim. Of course, she didn't need a twoleg to help her with that perfection. Her head, a little chubby to make up for the lack of fur, is well-rounded. She looks a little flat-faced occasionally with her ears always flattened back against her skull. This sometimes gives her problems with hearing, but usually cats will speak loud enough around her.
Eclipsestorm's body is compact, her fur actually makes her appear thin and graceful though she is not. Her muscles are tight and hard, well-layered over her curved bones.
Her paws, the size of her muzzle, are widespread and good for running endurantly. Her hard gray pads don't bleed or get scratched easily, saving her from many hooked claws. It not only helps her speed, but sometimes in battle a front paw blow is more effective like that. Her claws are short but wide, helpful when trying to dig up something like burdock root.
Alas, Eclipsestorm's favorite feature and her vanity is the fine white tail she has. It not only covers the imperfection on her leg, but it's beautiful and the softest place of her fur. She's covered in scratches and marks except for on her rear. It is intended to stay that way.
What I am like? I am alone, you will not see my truths. Nor will I know yours... Personality: Eclipsestorm is fierce and tends to be defensive with cats she is unfamiliar with. She spends a lot of time to herself and around the cats closest to her. She is untrusting though, and has trouble believing even the most truthful cats if she does not know them well. She is not even soft on the kits, going out of her way to avoid the nursery except when her duties lie there. She tends to have a fear of the world - which is why she keeps to herself. Eclipsestorm doesn't want the temptation of a mate and kits, or want a desire to become what she is not. The Warrior Code is a way of life - she will not take anything as an excuse if it is broken. Only StarClan can allow cats to change their paths. The only cats who seem to resist her defensive nature are other Medicine Cats. Because they share her beliefs and wisdom, she feels much more free and well-spoken around them. Despite all her cautions, Eclipsestorm opened up after her mentor died. She still was somewhat jumpy and easily discouraged but regained some sense of belief in herself. She began to work closer to the other cats than she did before, but still lacks the complete social skills most cats have. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, but she tries to make everyone jealous of her. Eclipsestorm tries to make herself look better than other cats, even if it means having to lower herself and put-down her Clanmates. It's strange for a Medicine Cat to have vanity, but it's something she never grew out of.
History: Kithood Eclipsekit was adventerous and eager like any other kit. She enjoyed to play-fight and was somewhat mischevious. Nearing apprenticeship, she closed up and her nature began to alter. In this time she took up the knowledge that she was not to become a warrior. Always wishing she could have kits of her own at the time, yet she accepted the fact without question. Her shyness began to increase as her ceramony approached, until alas she recieved her status.
Apprentice An apprentice, she fought many battles against sickness and grew to love her mentor's prescence. She lost her parents, but nothing less is expected in the life of a Clan cat. Eclipsepaw only had one encounter that didn't seem to fade away - trying to save kits from a fox and failing to do so. After recovering from the incident, she was well-trained as a Medicine Cat, thinking to be prepared for anything. She obeyed StarClan, and became respected quickly after she recieved her name, Eclipsestorm. Her mentor still would have had a long life after the she-cat got the name. Her heart was icy cold, and at times the Medicine Cat picked up warriors whispering about how naive and childish she was. Quickly angered, but not bout to show it she went on with all of her feelings bottled up.
Medicine Cat Eclipsestorm stuck to the code, as soon as her Mentor died she recieved an odd prophecy. Unfortunately, she still has yet to reveal it's meaning. He heart was stricken with greif for the only cat she cared for but life continued to go on and she lived it. She's been serving her Clan long and hard, thinking only of ways that might foreward their health. Her paws will work tirelessly once she's sure she looks alright and that her wall of ice is in place. She's clinging onto the belief that no cat could ever understand or accept her true self. Day by day still passes without Eclipsestorm really takinng notice of the events.
RP Sample:
Done it.... [Loststripe/star]
Kin: Whitefern and Rushingstream are the Dead Parents. <siblings later> i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd113/Holly_The_Cat_Lover/Holly%20Cats/White_Snow___White_Cat_II_by_ace-1.jpg[/img]
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Post by >>is_WHITE_cat<< on Aug 12, 2008 0:40:32 GMT -5
I did a little more editing here, but it's hard to change this into something as great as Loststripe! Simply because I'm more like Loststripe than Eclipsestorm... oh well...
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Post by Fadingstar on Aug 15, 2008 22:02:55 GMT -5
Name: Breezewhisper
Age: 27 Moons
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: StoneClan
Rank: Deputy(Currently a Queen though)
[bBreezewhisper's Advice:
[/b] Be prepared for anything and everything, and don't be surprised when you aren't. Quirks: Hates being touched, fears kits and toms, hates cats outside the Clans, and loathes ShadeClan. Appearance: A light figure that could be expected from her family of hunters as does her coat, matching of almost every one of her family. It is silverish and dark in color, perfect for blending into the stone of her Clan's territory. Her tail is of medium length, nothing special or unique about it. Breezewhisper's markings consist of black splotches that cover her ashen colored pelt and bright, piercing warm gold eyes. Often she isn't seen and just as often she doesn't want to be. Many fear her speed in battle and her ability to seemingly disappear and reappear ontop of you, not many realize that her thick coat hides powerful muscles that hold a suprising amount of strength. Breezewhisper enjoys the rush of battle and has many scars dotting her pelt proving this fact yet most know her as more of a hunter. Breezewhisper's quick, silent step can outpace most prey and her stealthy abilities take care of the rest. Personality: Breezewhisper, the calm force to be reckoned with, both in appearance and personality. She tends to be rather reclusive and withdrawn but oddly enough most respect and love her. She makes an easy task of organizing patrols and such and is usually sound in judging what is the right course of action. Never however disturb her when her eyes seemed glazed over, more than not you will end up walking away with a wound and hurt pride. Breezewhisper oddly enough is pretty even-tempered and level-headed a strong back up force for Duskstar. Her apprentices would find her easy on the heart, almost everyone can see the hurt bound in everyone of her perfectly calculated movements, but hard on training. You better leap when she tells you and never question her motives for doing anything or you will have hit one of her temper blowers. Around kits she always appears nervous and often will try to be as far away as possible from them. Her belly is full however with her own litter making this rather hard and during this stressful time she seems on edge and rather depressed. She is ready to have her kits any day now and to speak truthfully she'll be happy when it's all over. History: Born to Ashstep and Blackstride, Breezekit grew up with her two siblings Nightkit and Dustkit. Even from her kithood she didn't trust Dustkit, he was different and not just because he had a light pelt. She often was hit by his heavy paw when she rolled into him while being tackled by Nightkit. He scared her and she always tried to keep her distance. Besides this nothing of interest happened until she was made an apprentice with her siblings. Breezepaw was apprenticed to Fernpelt a caring she-cat that ended up being harsh despite the fact she never seemed it. Nightpaw was given Dawnfall as a mentor, he was an odd tom though despite his many quirks was a great mentor. Dustpaw recieved a rather abusive mentor by the name of Talonclaw that was constantly ratting on him and taking him out for long, grueling battle training sessions. Dustpaw grew farther apart from his sisters as the moons under Talonclaw made him grow harder and scared. Nightpaw and Breezepaw however got closer and they spent as much time as they could with each other. Soon that all came to an end however, Dustpaw had became desperate to escape his mentor. Nightpaw however had kept as close as she could to him and stood in his way as he tried to run away from his life in StoneClan. She however had misjudged the exact intensity of his need, he killed her in cold blood wit a flame in his eyes that no one would've expected from the quiet tom. Out into the night he ran and later resurfaced as a warrior of ShadeClan. Breezepaw took Nightpaw's death very hard and ever since she has hated her brother and any mention of ShadeClan that took him in. Still in Nightpaw's memory she finished her training early at the age of ten moons. Breezewhisper was noted for her Nobility and Determination. She was still an easy cat to get along with but everyone felt the growing sadness in her heart and they all too found a spot for her in their's. Everyone had loved Nightpaw and it had been a great blow to the whole Clan. Breezewhisper enveloped herself in Warrior's Tasks and it didn't take long for her to be named her first apprentice at 14 moons. Gorsepaw was sweet and always tried to do his best for her, perhaps it was the fact the sadness now rolled off of her and was evident to everyone. Gorsefur turned out to make quite a warrior and everyone gave credit to Brezewhisper's steady training, her calculating movements in everything was a great help to her in the long run but everyone feared why it had arisen in such a kind cat. Breezewhisper was named deputy after another 11 moons she was named the new deputy after Dewfoot was killed in a rockslide. She was the obvious choice and everyone in the Clan accepted Duskstar's decision easily. Then disaster struck again to damper her spirits more when she took a solitary hunting patrol. A fight broke out between her and a rogue, despite her talents he blind sided her with a move that was something she would've never expected another cat to do to her. Overpowered and unconscious the rogue had full control over her until a patrol found her sickening, twisted heap. Waking up a few days later with major wounds around her eyes, muzzle, and flanks she also had a big tear in her ear despite this she remained a beautiful figure if you could get past the deep and ever-present terror and sadness in her eyes. A moon later her belly had grown rather large and fearfully she approached the medicine cat. She was pregnant. With a rogue's litter at that. Now she awaits the looming day of their birth, what could possibly happen now? Kin:Ashstep(father, deceased) Blackstride(mother, deceased) Dustwind(brother, ShadeClan) Nightpaw(sister, deceased)[/center]
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Post by Duskstar on Aug 16, 2008 12:19:53 GMT -5
Accepted as StoneClan's deputy ^^ Congrats Fading! ;D ;D Now if you could post that in accepted Stone, that would be fabulous.
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Post by bramble on Aug 17, 2008 21:32:43 GMT -5
Sniffle, oh well. =)
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Post by Duskstar on Sept 2, 2008 19:24:34 GMT -5
Well you gave it a good go Bramble ^^
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Post by bramble on Sept 3, 2008 21:07:46 GMT -5
Thanks
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