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Post by Duskstar on Aug 14, 2008 20:18:44 GMT -5
AME;; MarblepeltAGE;; 30 moons GENDER;; female CLAN;; ShadeClan RANK;; Deputy IMAGE;; xXx
APPEARANCE;; Marblepelt is actually a fairly pretty she-cat. Average in size, Marblepelt has medium length pure ivory fur. Accenting her lovely pure white coat is a pair of shocking baby-blue optics. Keen in sight and hearing that plainly proves that despite rumors of white and blue-eyed cats being blind or deaf are not true for this she-cat. Moving with defined grace, Marblepelt is quite a creature to watch hunt. Silent as a mouse, swift as a striking snake. As expected of just about any decent minded she-cat, Marblepelt keeps her fur sleek and soft, always well cared for. Fairly long slender legs hold up this marvelous snowy she-cat and there always seems to be a look of slight superiority on her face. Her gaze alone could make you shiver. Some say there's ice in her veins and frost in her bite. They'd almost be right. Pearly fangs and needle-sharp claws adorn her mouth and paws making her a whirlwind of an enemy to take on despite being a female. When she moves, Marblepelt moves gracefully, totally sure of herself and confident. It's hard to make her slip up or stumble. Never looking a mess and always cool as ice Marblepelt looks the part of a creature carved from the coldest of arctic ice.
PERSONALITY;; Just like she looks Marblepelt has a cold-streak a mile wide. She aloof and seems to ooze confidence and icy authority. Her gaze is piercing and she never ducks her head accept to her clan leader and her ancestors. Anyone else is below her notice. This isn't because she has a superiority complex like some cats think. Other warriors are below her notice because she trusts them to be able to take care of themselves and that there are bigger things to worry about the commonplace warriors. Always cool and calm, it's like she never wavers despite this being untrue. Marblepelt keeps up a firm calm, icy facade even if the sky was falling and their ancestors were walking among them. Even in dark situations that have everyone panicking, Marblepelt keeps a firm hold on her sanity and can usually provide some sort of logical reasoning. A sharp word from this she-cat alone would make anyone freeze.
Once you crack Marblepelt's cool facade however, she's horrid. Marblepelt has a temper, a vast temper at that. One wrong word about her leader or clan and she'll be snarling, hackles raised and claws out in half a heartbeat. If someone insults an apprentice of hers, Marblepelt is relaxed and simply watches for reactions. If her apprentice is irrational and attacks instantly, Marblepelt reprimands them and turns a brawl between apprentices into a tough-love training session.
Despite the thoughts of many ShadeClan cats, Marblepelt isn't heartless, merely heartbroken. Marblepelt cares for every apprentice she's trained and every cat she's watched live and die in her clan. She protects her leader without a second thought to her own life because she thinks she's lost all she possibly could. Any apprentice Marblepelt ever taught started out hating her but in the end was either grateful or considered her a tough-love sort of mother figure. Lonely moonlit nights often set Marblepelt down the path to sorrowful memories and if someone comes upon her during these times of silent sulking on her past, she's known be defensive and unleash a mere taste of her temper.
HISTORY;; Marblepelt is the daughter of Onyxheart and Quietstep, peaceful ShadeClan cats. Her siblings included three brothers; Mousenose, Lichenpelt and Raggedtail as well as two sisters, Flyheart and Smallcloud. Growing up in a big family, being the firstborn of them all, Marblekit learned to be a fighter at a young age. Mousekit, Smallcloud and Lichenkit were easy targets for bully apprentices and older kits so Marblekit often stepped in to squish out their fun. Flykit was Marblekit's best friend as she was growing up though she often found the company of any one of her siblings to be good company. Raggedkit was always able to calm Marblekit when she began loosing her temper at some stupid apprentice which was a good thing because it happened often.
When she became an apprentice, Marblepaw was very proud. Her mentor was a well known ShadeClan warrior named Stormfrost that had trained some of the best warriors in the clan. It turned out he was a rigorous trainer. It wasn't long before Marblepaw found herself awake before even the dawn patrols, hunting and gathering new bedding for the dens. At first, Marblepaw hated her mentor and came to dread the hours she spent under his watchful yellow gaze. When she mouthed off to him one day however, Stormfrost challenged her to a spar. If she could beat him, she wouldn't have to gather bedding for a moon. Marblepaw jumped at the challenge and took him on. She wound up in the medicine cat's den with a scratch in her flank and bruises blooming under her ivory pelt. Raggedpaw shook his head, Flypaw laughed and Smallpaw, Lichenpaw and Mousepaw took pity on her. Stormfrost didn't. The next day she was up again but this time, it wasn't hunting and gathering bedding. It was fighting. Stormfrost purposefully took her in search of a fox den near the edge of the territory to drive them out for good. That was just how intense he was.
It turned out that within one year of her life, Marblepaw found herself fast becoming a warrior. At 12 moons old, early for a warrior naming, Marblepaw became Marblepelt and finally received the pride of her intense mentor. A few moons later Marblepelt became the mentor of Pebblepaw, later named Pebbletail. Three moons later Marblepelt was in love. The tom was a ShadeClan cat named Tigerstripe, he was a quiet and patient cat and a stark contrast to Marblepelt. At sixteen moons of age, Marblepelt became a queen.
In her litter Marblepelt birthed six kits, three males and three females. The males were named Stripedkit, Cliffkit and Dewkit. Marblepelt's daughters were named Rainkit, Icekit and Frostkit. Cliffkit and Stripedkit both favored their father's dark tabby pelt while Rainkit and Dewkit were very light shades of grey. Icekit and Frostkit of course were ivory like Marblepelt. When her kits were two moons old, a fox raided the nursery while Marblepelt was speaking with someone outside of the camp. Dewkit, Stripedkit and Rainkit died before Marblepelt could save them. That left just Icekit, Frostkit and Cliffkit. In the raid the deputy of ShadeClan rushed to Marblepelt's aid and was wound chasing the fox off and soon fell ill. When Marblepelt's kits were made apprentices, it turned out the deputy died.
To replace him, Marblepelt was named the deputy against the better judgment of some other cats in the clan. Marblepelt watched from a deputy's prospective as Icepaw, Frostpaw and Cliffpaw became Icegaze, Froststorm and Cliffedge.
KIN;; Apprentice; Pebbletail Mentor; Stormfrost Mate; Tigerstripe Kits; Icegaze, Cliffedge, Froststorm, Dewkit, Stripedkit and Rainkit Mother; Quietstep Father; Onyxheart Siblings; Flyheart, Raggedtail, Mousenose, Smallcloud and Lichenpelt
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