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Post by spottedlegs on Aug 28, 2008 23:02:22 GMT -5
Name: Spottedlegs
Age: 15 Moons
Gender: Tom
Clan: Loner
Rank: Warrior
Appearance: Golden fur, with light brown spots across him. He has blue-green eyes.
Personality:Spottedlegs is a peaceful cat, and would rather negotiate problems than claw the eyes off another cat. When he is forced to fight, he is fearless and vicious, even though he does not use his claws.
History: Once vicious, he would attack anything he saw. Until he met a cat in battle, and had his front right shoulder deeply slashed. His opponent then tended to him, and ever since then, he has been working on controling his anger.
RP Sample: Spottedlegs woke up on a Bale of hay, inside the barn he has called home since he can remember. He heard the sound of a rat scurrying nearby, rolled onto his belly, and crawled forward until he could see it at the base of his bale. He crawled to the edge, and prepared to pounce. He came down on top of the clueless rat, and finished it in a swift bite.
Kin: Spottedlegs doesn't know if he has any family.
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Post by Duskstar on Aug 29, 2008 9:11:51 GMT -5
Ok, make this a lot longer. Two sentances for each is not acceptable.
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Post by spottedlegs on Aug 29, 2008 10:28:08 GMT -5
ok, i'll work on it.
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Post by spottedlegs on Aug 29, 2008 14:35:03 GMT -5
Name: Spottedlegs
Age: 15 Moons
Gender: Tom
Clan: Loner
Rank: Warrior
Appearance: Golden fur, with light brown spots across him. He has blue-green eyes. He is of even height, and has a strong build. He has a small scar above his left eye, and another on his right flank.
Personality:Spottedlegs is a peaceful cat, and would rather negotiate problems than claw the eyes off another cat. When he is forced to fight, he is fearless and vicious, even though he does not use his claws. He began doing this ever since the day he was defeated and cared for by a cat he can never recall. When he is angered, he reverts to his past self, and will attack anything he sees.
History: Once vicious, he would attack anything he saw. Until he met a cat in battle, and had his front right shoulder deeply slashed. His opponent then tended to him, and ever since then, he has been working on controling his anger. He has gotten a lot better now, and allows almost anything on his land, unless it's goal is to disrupt the peace.
RP Sample: Spottedlegs woke up on a Bale of hay, inside the barn he has called home since he can remember. He heard the sound of a rat scurrying nearby, rolled onto his belly, and crawled forward until he could see it at the base of his bale. He crawled to the edge, and prepared to pounce. He came down on top of the clueless rat, and finished it in a swift bite.
Kin: Spottedlegs doesn't know if he has any family.
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Post by Duskstar on Aug 29, 2008 16:39:43 GMT -5
Ok, no offense, but I think this site may be a bit too advanced for you. For some examples of the level here look at Duskstar's bio, or Fading's, or Moth's.
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